Tuesday, April 14, 2009

Half-Baked

I'm back. Fifteen hours in the car with Demon Baby. Do the math. I feel like I have been slugged with a sack of rocks.

But . . . that isn't to say I am without a writing post. However, the title of this post can refer to my brain today . . . or the point of my post. Or perhaps both.

Ever meet someone who wants to write a book and they approach you with what they think is a really cool idea. Only the idea is sort of a fragment. A lot of times the really cool idea is either an interesting character or a single element of a thriller-esque plot--a heist, a caper, a con, a person about to blow up the president.

My reaction is usually . . . AND? A fragment of a cool idea is simply a cake that is half-baked. A werewolf is not an idea for a book. A werewolf who is a vegetarian isn't even an idea for a book. The risk when you start full-speed ahead with a half-baked idea is it may never bake. The cake may never rise. There's just not enough ingredients.

So it was that I was driving when I came up with a totally amazing Shiny New Idea. This was about two hours into my trip. Out of nowhere I had an idea for a late-YA, and even a character name--Lark. And I knew she was special. It's a fantasy idea, and Lark has a special skill I have never seen done in a book before. A mythology that came to me fully formed. A half-baked idea.

You see, just because Lark has this certain gift, and just because it's original, and just because it has dramatic possibilities, doesn't mean she's anything more than a character running around in my brain.

By the fourth hour, I had the mythology more organized. I had a historical placement for Lark's lineage in the Russian Revolution. I had her great-great-grandmother . . . I had a dramatic prologue.

Lark was still half-baked.

By this time, I was heading into a driving rainstorm in Georgia with a trucker who decided to eff-with me on the road. I had to concentrate. Ahh, the joys of driving alone with three children in the car. I stopped for coffee, giving the trucker time to go find someone ELSE to bother.

Back in the car, the driving rain meant intensity, but Lark kept coming into the fringes of my head. By hour five, she had a voice. By hour six, she had a mother, and a reason for escaping her father and coming to a new town.

By hour eight, she had a love interest. And the idea was starting to go from half-baked to baked. Her love interest was VERY different, and there was a natural collision course between her special skill and his special need.

Three hours later, I realized the theme was free will and personal choice. Always good to have a theme.

I had the villian. I had the darkest of dark moments. I had what everyone looked like.

I had a full-risen cake . . . um . . . book.

Of course, now all I have to do is write it.

But the bottom line is a book is more than the sum of its parts . . . and yet it is the sum of its parts. Cool ideas aren't books. Neither are interesting characters. You need all the ingredients.

Thoughts? Or am I merely half-baked today. (Don't answer that!)

Peace,
E

32 comments:

... 9:55 AM, April 14, 2009  

Erm....um...wow? You think all this shiz up in yer noggin on a 15 hour drive, AND can make it into a compelling story? Amazing.

It's funny. Something has been "missing" from my life for exactly 2 weeks. And now I know why....

Your blog has been moved, and I was clueless up until just now, when I decided to click your "old blog" trying to piece together where you've been.

I miss you. :)

Erica Orloff 9:58 AM, April 14, 2009  

Hi Realm:
Miss you, too, Chicka!!!

I was away for ten days, too. Oh, and had shingles. Fun times.

;-)
E

Jon VanZile 10:05 AM, April 14, 2009  

Welcome back, E! It was nice to see you ...

Actually, this post perfectly describes the book I'm working on now, and why I felt it necessary to write it twice. The first time, I had an idea, but no story. This time around, I've been working mainly on building the MC's personal story ... his skill-set, his arc, and how it all fits into the mythology that arrived pretty much fully formed three books ago.

One thing I've noticed is that it allows me to concentrate on the small moments. When all I had was the idea itself ("Oooh, a totally different take on dragons!"), I didn't have anything to say when I wasn't writing about the mythology. But when the story is really about this boy, the complicated mythology fades into the background and instead we read about his private moments.

Will it work? We'll have to see ...

Jude Hardin 10:07 AM, April 14, 2009  

I'm a half-baked kinda guy. I don't ever know what my stories are about until the writing is well under way. I wish something would come to me fully-formed...

Erica Orloff 10:23 AM, April 14, 2009  

Lurker:
I'll have to let you know about this book idea. But yeah, once the mythology is sorted out, the characters can evolve into three-dimensional beings.

E

Erica Orloff 10:25 AM, April 14, 2009  

Jude:
I don't know . . . maybe spend more time with the idea working through some of it. I had 15 hours of nonstop world building (in between yelling at my kids and wanting to drive off the road). I think the danger in half-baked stuff is you can rush headlong at a book or story only to realize it amounts to . . . not much. A meh. And then fixing that AFTER the fact leads to writing that's not organic.
E

Jude Hardin 10:35 AM, April 14, 2009  

Good points, Erica.

Amy Sue Nathan 10:39 AM, April 14, 2009  

I save up my half-baked ideas, write them down, put them away, and add to them as bits and pieces filter through to me. I'm hoping that when WIP is done - I'll have something that's more than half-baked waiting in the wings to be written, or at least explored.

I'm impressed that you can drive and remember all that. I have to write all my loose bits down or I forget them!!

Melanie Hooyenga 10:40 AM, April 14, 2009  

Wow! I love hearing how the idea went from a spark of an idea to a full-fledged, er, idea. Very cool. :)

Welcome back - it was quiet it blogland last week.

Erica Orloff 10:46 AM, April 14, 2009  

Amy:
I have a lot of "Half-baked Files."

:-)
E

Erica Orloff 10:47 AM, April 14, 2009  

Melanie:
I had spotty WiFi on the road. My iPhone was about it.

E

Joe Barone 10:56 AM, April 14, 2009  

Welcome back.

I don't know whether I'd want to meet you on the road when you are driving or not. Anyway, you made it safely, and we're all glad.

Erica Orloff 10:59 AM, April 14, 2009  

Joe:
LOL! I am a very careful driver.
E

ssas 11:57 AM, April 14, 2009  

I have a half-baked idea about a sort of super-hero. Five years ago I would have just started writing. Now I'm thinking and thinking about it. He's got a name and a skill and a weakness, but no story as of yet.

I'll write him when he does.

Erica Orloff 12:16 PM, April 14, 2009  

Sex Scenes:
I have a few characters like that--pretty cool ideas waiting for a storyline.

E

Mark Terry 1:12 PM, April 14, 2009  

About halfway through your post I was thinking, Well, give it a little time and the other components will arrive. Then I read the rest of your post and that's exactly what you did. Yeah, I'm a lot better now about recognizing an idea that's good and one that is half-baked, and even better at recognizing what a half-baked idea might need.

Erica Orloff 1:55 PM, April 14, 2009  

Mark:
Me, too. I used to think the "cool factor" (aka high concept) could trump the rest of it. But it still needs thorough baking. And if I was going to hazard a guess, that's the reason a lot of books get rejected--great premise and hook falls down midway through.

E

Kath Calarco 1:59 PM, April 14, 2009  

Erica, this ROCKS! And now, even more so, does your feedback on my Fic to Film paper. The paper was half-baked (sort of like my professor).

Clearly, I believe, all writers start with the "what if?" and let it "rise" toward greatness (hopefully). You pointed out something I feel is missed by many: the theme. Just my opinion, but once you have it, the story itself can change as you write. But without theme, there's no cohesiveness. And that's where the wheels can fall off...the cake goes flat. ;)

Erica Orloff 2:22 PM, April 14, 2009  

kath:
I do think I can play with what happens as long as the theme I see is an anchor. I realize that I've lately been gravitating toward the idea of free will and of sometimes CHOOSING to self-sacrifice or make choices that others might not understand but are right in the context of the free will of the person in question. But unlike, perhaps, a lot of people, I believe in things like assisted suicide . . .

E

Anonymous 3:09 PM, April 14, 2009  

Welcome back, Erica. I missed you.

Erica Orloff 3:13 PM, April 14, 2009  

FF:
Thanks! I missed the gang, too.

E

Anonymous 3:53 PM, April 14, 2009  

I'm not a good cook...at all. I'm pretty good at burning water though.

Luckly we aren't talking about real cake baking.

I'm pretty good at coming up with a half baked idea, fleshing it out a little bit, and then losing interest. This his been the death of some good ideas, but it has also been the birth of Nameless, Escapade, and my circus fantasy that just refuses to be named. All of those ideas were born of ugly little halfbaked ones.

My halfbaked file is huge..was huge. My computer ate it a few months ago, but I wasn't really invested in any of the ideas anyway.

I'm glad that you and the kids got home safe and sound.

-J.T.

Erica Orloff 5:21 PM, April 14, 2009  

JT:
My children will attest that I am an abysmal cook.

;-)
E

Anonymous 5:46 PM, April 14, 2009  

Where was this post last year when I needed it? So, last year I got this really cool idea for a contemporary romance. She worked for her family in the bakery. She could whip up anything that required sugar and flour. I even searched out odd names for desserts to be the running joke. Got a hero who came equipped with a really good black moment. And, then at 20k NADA.

Couldn't figure out why. And, then I reverted to three years old and started asking why? and why? and why to those whys. I now know how to fix the book. But it's no longer shiny. Kind of rusted actually, and for the life of me I just can't get back into the book.

Now maybe if I had a long car ride to let the idea simmer for a bit before heading to the races i.e. computer this story would be done by now.

Le sigh.

I would also like to second the first post. I missed ya. *and one of these days I'll change the link on my blog so I don't have to click twice.*

Caryn Caldwell 7:46 PM, April 14, 2009  

Great way to put it! I have a ton of half-baked ideas, and as I'm nearing the end of revisions on my current MS, I'm starting to decide which idea deserves the time in the oven (to extend your metaphor a bit). It's a fun stage, though a little nerve-wracking as there's always the concern that the idea won't work after all. Though, really, if I can't get the idea to gel I usually just set it aside for a while and come back to it later. By then, who knows?

Marcia Colette 8:44 PM, April 14, 2009  

All of my stories start out with half-baked ideas and none I'm willing to share. I'll start talking abot it when the knife through the middle comes out clean. By then, I'll probably have 350 pages written. The frosting and decorations usually come with the revisions. :-)

Doggone it. Now you have me thinking about the cakes I passed up at the grocery store earlier today.

Erica Orloff 10:33 PM, April 14, 2009  

Melissa:
Have most definitely been at the 20K NADA moment.
E

Erica Orloff 10:34 PM, April 14, 2009  

Caryn:
Like you, I let them bake a bit and decide which has the most potential to rise.
E

Erica Orloff 10:34 PM, April 14, 2009  

Marcia'
I ate muffins tonight. ;-)
E

Spiced Apple Eye 8:11 AM, April 15, 2009  

welcome back.

Erica Orloff 8:38 AM, April 15, 2009  

Thanks, Richmond.

Sarah Laurenson 11:32 AM, April 15, 2009  

Hope you're feeling better - both from the drive (and the idiot trucker) and from the shingles.

I met a guy who was in school to become a writer and he had this 'wonderful' idea which he proceeded to tell me about. Not sure if it was half-baked, but the fact that he had yet to commit word one to paper seemed to make it half-baked to me. You see, he'd had this idea for quite some time and still nada on the page. Now that's half-baked.

My WIP in revision started out as a cool character who had no story. He bounced around in the back of my brain for awhile before he got a story. Halfway through writing his story, he got a different story. But, oh well. It's coming together - slowly.

My current WIP started out as a pitch for the lucky pitch party at the Book Roast. No intention of writing it. I was just having fun writing the pitch. Yeah. Now I'm writing the book.


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