Wednesday, June 09, 2010

Deconstruction

If you want to know how to create a character, I would say read this blog post. It pretty much sums it up. I can stop writing now.

But being me . . . and having my coffee to get me going, I'll add that I often think the movie Deconstructing Harry is a pretty accurate portrayal of the way writers create characters.

In general, I am asked to read a lot of fiction in my life, both as an editor, and as a writer with a lot of writer-pals. I started thinking about when a book is a meh, and when a book holds together for me . . . and it is that idea that there is a seamless, uniting thread to a character. EVEN in the contradictions.

I think about it as applied to me. I loathe organized religion, but take my children to church every Sunday. Why? I vacillate between moral relativism and ethical realism, and decided I wanted to offer them solace in an insane world. Contradictory? Sure. I hate clutter but love tchotchkes--can't bear to part with them, really. Why? Because I am completely sentimental, which goes back to solace for my children, which . . . uniting threads.

Which brings me to the meh . . . I think that sometimes writers go about this process BACKWARDS. They START with the quirks. "Oh, I think it would be cool if he talked to his gun and was an alcoholic." Maybe they start with what they think will sell or what is required of the genre, but it can feel very hollow and lack emotional depth.

I tend to think start with the whole . . . deconstruct to the parts. Create a unifying thread.

In my wip, Aleks is a stoic and self-contained doctor. He was orphaned by Chernobyl, and had thydroid cancer as a child and spent time in isolation wards in a dreary children's hospital behind the Iron Curtain. When you deconstruct Aleks, you find the little boy. His unifying thread is solitariness. He is of this world but apart from it.

In essence, my character has a THEME.

Thoughts? How would you deconstruct your latest character? What trait has its roots in a unifying thread?

22 comments:

Amy Sue Nathan 9:23 AM, June 09, 2010  

What a thoughtful post, Erica. I think our characters deserve that kind of attention and complexity. Now I'm going to try to figure out the characters in my WIP!

Erica Orloff 9:47 AM, June 09, 2010  

Amy:
Thanks . . . It's weird, I mentally picture it as some people start with the traits. But I tend to start with them from childhood and move forward, and then see the end result and the unifying theme. I think. LOL!

Kath Calarco 9:49 AM, June 09, 2010  

WOW! Sometimes, Erica, I think we were separated at birth (minus my several years ahead of yours). I share your religious viewpoints. I don't attend church; don't buy into organized religion, but I openly pray, not only for guidance and miracles, but it's my way of honoring the higher power, whether it's there or not.

Moving on...

I didn't realize this, but now that I look at the main character in my current epic, I have an actual THEME, his oddities rooted in his childhood. Damn, I AM brilliant!

P.S. I'm going to spend the day wondering why an alcoholic would talk to his gun. Perhaps the gun spoke to him from the bottom of a 40 ounce bottle. ;-)

Erica Orloff 10:20 AM, June 09, 2010  

kath:
I actually worked with a writer once who got five or six rejections because his detective wasn't unique enough. So he started adding quirks. But they were never organic . . . it didn't work . . . I google him occasionally . . . still doesn't have a deal as far as I know.

Spiced Apple Eye 11:23 AM, June 09, 2010  

I've almost reached that point of pushing through, as in writing even though it doesn't meet my "theme" and by default discovered there is something deeper here in the story. Everything that evolved to become essential to the story started out that way. I don't know if they're quirks.

The conference is $175 this year. I saw you are on 2 panels. I had decided I wasn't going to go until I saw that. I thought you weren't a joiner ;)

Erica Orloff 11:41 AM, June 09, 2010  

Richmond:
I'm not--LOL! But you know, JRW has been very gracious to me, and I am a fan of YOU, GiGi, Meg . . . and just about everyone I've met. And GiGi asked me to be on a panel or two. You CAN'T say no to GiGi. :-)

Mary@GigglesandGuns 11:50 AM, June 09, 2010  

My main characters have biographies. Not that show up in the book but that I write so 'I know them.' Things that make them unique are used where they come in. Things for me are filed away -- for me.


Maribeth
Giggles and Guns

Erica Orloff 11:57 AM, June 09, 2010  

Maribeth:
Me, too! I don't necessarily write them out, but I know about them.

Spiced Apple Eye 12:12 PM, June 09, 2010  

This is true, Gigi is one remarkable woman and Meg is impressive too.

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Zoe Winters 5:54 PM, June 09, 2010  

I think you and I create characters the same way. I thought there was something wrong with me when I didn't sit around and list a bunch of quirks. I mostly discover my characters through their dialogue. What someone says and how they say it says a lot about them. But that's just the entry point for me.

Erica Orloff 6:02 PM, June 09, 2010  

Zoe:
That is definitely an entry point for me, too!

ssas 6:17 PM, June 09, 2010  

I'll write about the one I know best: Aidan. (An old character.)

He's freewheeling, spirited, full of love and laughter, even when he's shooting demons. He's also a Seer, so he knows bits of the future and what others are thinking. He has a short temper, especially when people push against his loving nature and he'll flare up if anyone crosses his twin brother. He's not responsible at all and of course everyone forces responsibility on him. All of this is not denial, though. It's because he knows that bad shit is going down all around him. (It's after the Apocalypse, after all.) And he makes the conscious decision every day to enjoy life anyway.

It's either that or collapse into tears. And 24 year old demi-demons just don't do that. Not in public, anyway.

Nadine 11:51 PM, June 09, 2010  

I never plan quirks, they just seem to come as I write. I recently noticed I wrote that my MC picks at her thumbnails when nervous.

As do I. You can always tell when I'm stressed because I won't have any thumbnails, though the rest of my nails remain intact.

Ewoh Nairb 2:12 AM, June 10, 2010  

I'm working with characters in my WIP and they just seem to do weird things. So I sit with these things for a bit and I realize that they really are acting within their character... I just hadn't taken the time to get to know them. Then I read your/lurkermonkey's blogs and I just got it. Thanks for a great and thought provoking post as always.

Ewoh Nairb 2:14 AM, June 10, 2010  

I'm working with characters in my WIP and they just seem to do weird things. So I sit with these things for a bit and I realize that they really are acting within their character... I just hadn't taken the time to get to know them. Then I read your/lurkermonkey's blogs and I just got it. Thanks for a great and thought provoking post as always.

Lauren 11:29 AM, June 10, 2010  

Very though provoking post. I have a few MCs, but the main MC is named Hailey. Her personality like Aleks' is defined by events in her childhood. She suffered an accident at the age of 12 that resulted in amnesia. She turns to books and study as an escape and because her uncle, a leading scholar, took her away from abusive parents on the day of her accident (not that she can really remember). These events are revealed throughout the first half of the book.

I think that many people and characters alike have backstory that explains their inner selves and why they behave the way they do.

Spiced Apple Eye 7:34 PM, June 11, 2010  

Today is the 8th grade dance. It never occurred to me to take a picture of my daughter all dressed up.

I take 3K pictures a year of everything yet when normal people remember to use a camera, I forget.

If you look back over 30 years of photos there are very few posed ones because I prefer people photos where the subject is relaxed and unselfconscious.

When I'm writing though, that inconsistency that makes sense never comes. Kudos to you guys who can achieve it.

Erica Orloff 8:37 AM, June 14, 2010  

Starbucks:
I like this Aidan!

Erica Orloff 8:38 AM, June 14, 2010  

ewoh:
I think organic characters definitely do their own thing.

Erica Orloff 8:38 AM, June 14, 2010  

Lauren:
VERY intense and interesting back story. Good for you in coming up with it.

Erica Orloff 8:39 AM, June 14, 2010  

Richmond:
I think the more "real" your characters are to you, the deeper you get into their story, the more surprises they hand you.


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