Saturday, June 05, 2010

So I'm Going to Use This . . .

Oldest Son is a police Explorer. This caused no small bit of anguish in my family (if you are a long-time blog reader, you know I am terrified of law enforcement, and my family loathes cops/the law). My mother was upset and told me to talk him out of it. I haven't even TOLD my father because that would just be World War III. Considering the kind of trouble a 15-year-old young man COULD be getting into, I have made my peace with it. Last night, when he brought home the form for him to get his uniform ($133) . . . he asked me once again if I was upset. I told him I had spent the last couple of months accepting it and that I was proud. Maybe that's not the right word. I love my kid, so . . . you know, I ADMIRE what he does.

So that's the back story . . . yesterday, my beloved housekeeper told me she was stopped by the cops. She and I were sharing a glass of wine . . . we're more sisters now that anything . . . and she related the tale. She was on her way to her f/t job at 4:00 a.m., in her uniform (fast food establishment) . . . the cop stopped her. She was over the speed limit in a weird speed trap sort of stretch where the busy street changes speed from 45 to 25 or something for a short stretch. The cop asked her if she WANTED a $200 ticket. Why do cops do this? Does anyone say, "YES! PLEASE!" Of course, she was also terrified . . . deportment. She told him she didn't mean to speed . . . didn't realize . . . and she was late for work. He asked where she worked. She told him the specific establishment. He said, "All right, I will see you there when it opens." Then he let her go. She considered not showing up for work--but that would mean she'd get fired. So she went to work, set up and opened the restaurant . . . and sure enough the cop showed up--and ordered breakfast. He said, "If you had lied, I would have given you the ticket, but you told the truth . . . here you are. Have a nice day."

Now, in print . . . I'm not getting the inflections right, plus I am translating this from Spanish to English, but the demeanor of this officer was KIND. He recognized she was a worker not even making a living wage. And he let her off. And I thought . . . you know . . . this is the kind of little gesture if you wanted to make a cop three-dimensional in a book. Something small . . . some little act of kindness he does, whatever. I thought, "I'm using this someday." It's the right kind of detail.

So what was the last thing you borrowed from real life for a book you are writing?

22 comments:

Merry Monteleone 12:02 PM, June 05, 2010  

You know, on this one I'm taking great pains NOT to borrow... it's set in the neighborhood I grew up in and the characters are my own but I took real pains to make them fit there, to make them seem like someone who would've grown up down the block... if you knew the neighborhood, or if you're from a neighborhood, you know that they're unique in the fact they fit in there... an outsider wouldn't at all...

Anyway, I've exxed out any scene or story even vaguely reminiscent of a real life event because I don't want people to think I've borrowed from their lives... they likely will anyway, but as long as I know I haven't, it's okay.

As for that cop, I think I might love him... I'm like you with that... I'd much rather have a criminal driving behind me than a squad car... I often think the criminals are more reasonable.

Erica Orloff 12:06 PM, June 05, 2010  

Merry:
I will pull off the road into a parking lot if a cop follows me and wait until the car passes. I will do this in broad daylight when I am well within the speed limit. They FREAK ME OUT.

Crystal Posey 12:27 PM, June 05, 2010  

I just use myself...

I caught my stove on fire a few nights ago and tried to put it out with corn meal. It doesn't work. In fact, it made the fire jump from under the eye to on top of the eye, and the more corn meal I used the bigger it got. I finally got the flour and it ended up being small, no damage, I was a hero.... Oh and did I mention it was started with the brand new, $60 pot The Mr. just got. I guess I don't have to tell you that he's the cook not me. He's hiding pots and I'm pushing the corn meal BEHIND the flour.

Stephen Parrish 12:29 PM, June 05, 2010  

Stranger than fiction. You sure he wasn't after, you know, something else?

Mary@GigglesandGuns 4:53 PM, June 05, 2010  

Last thing I 'borrowed' was a seemingly normal personality that was so extremely psycho.
The idea of that cop would be great. But being a skeptic i always wonder what the real motive is.

Maribeth
Giggles and Guns

Sarah Laurenson 5:43 PM, June 05, 2010  

I borrowed my life. Still working on that book.

I used to be a cop. My first degree was in Law Enforcement. Very interesting people go into that field. Many of them are not the kind I want with guns holding off the bad guys, but still. They risk their lives for almost poverty level wages. You have to be crazy or altruistic or a little of both.

Spiced Apple Eye 8:08 PM, June 05, 2010  

SO I won't tell you which of the folks at JRW are cops in their non-writing lives. :)

The scariest "Authority" person I ever met was a Navy officer who informed me that he had the authority to arrest me for any law infraction even speeding. His authority superseded the police's. There was something intimidating about the idea that he thought this way...I quit dating him.

Erica Orloff 10:05 PM, June 05, 2010  

Posey:
Considering I am a mom to a Wild Child, I will file that under "good to know just in case."

Nadine 3:07 AM, June 06, 2010  

I love that he didn't give her the ticket!

My current WIP is all me. All the ups and downs and adventures I've had living here.

Aimlesswriter 9:15 AM, June 06, 2010  

Very weird cop, but nice.
I think I borrow everything from real life.
My dd once lost her cell phone in NYC. It was picked up by this guy, Ephraim, who called me at one in the morning. As I was talking to him I went to check on my dd...she wasn't home yet. I almost bit his head off but he kept telling me he found it on the ground. I asked him to turn it into the police and he said he didn't get along with police. I handed the phone to my dh and I ran for the other phone to hunt down my dd. I was in a panic!
It turned out dd had lost her phone while she climbed on a lamp post to get a picture of Hugh Jackman. She didn't even know it was lost until she got home and I met her at the door.
The bad guy in my next book is named Ephraim.

ssas 10:17 AM, June 06, 2010  

It doesn't strike me as all that nice, somehow, but I'm glad he didn't give her a ticket.

My problem with the police is an overinflated sense of self-worth. You find it a lot in military folks, too.

I guess it's probably necessary, but it'd be nice if they knew how to turn it on and off. It's something that Castile points out to Trin pretty regularly...

But real life: I'm going to write a book about a kid who bartends for his estranged dad in a little mountain town in CO. The people are loosely based on the folks who run the bar behind my house in Grand Lake. The Mexican drug trade comes to town and tears up someone behind the bar, literally. Everyone thinks it's a bear attack but there's a witness...

Considering my friend, the bartender, just walked me home from that bar at 2 am in the pitch black alley because he'd seen 3 bears there in the past week, I guess I'm pulling from reality. :)

Ann Marie Wraight 2:25 PM, June 06, 2010  

Almost ALL my stories are based on things I've experienced first hand - and we ARE a MAD family so I have many crazy stories - or second hand happenings which have been retold to me by someone like your sister/housekeeper...I think that means I ABSOLUTELY should find a pen name totally unlike my real one...I would HATE to be recognised on the street should I ever become famous!!!

This guy sounds like a new breed of reinforcement officer... he seems to put being humane before simply acting by the letter of the law...life really isn't as simple as that.

Now I wonder what life lesson/s taught Mr.Nice to behave like such a decent person...nice thought to base a book scenario on!

Anonymous 2:06 AM, June 07, 2010  

I used to trust the police. Then I loved to France and started participating in demonstrations. I saw what the police would do to protesters. For example, they hit a friend that was trying to keep a fellow protester from being trampled, and then when he filed a complaint, they said that he hit a police officer. Now, I break out in hives at the sight of a uniform.

Anonymous 2:07 AM, June 07, 2010  

"loved" was supposed to be "moved"

Kath Calarco 12:38 PM, June 07, 2010  

It's unfortunate that corrupt cops eclipse the rare good ones, which makes it difficult for them (the good guys).

I can't say as I've used real life situations. Maybe subconsciously I have - dunno.

P.S. to Stephen Parrish - not liking your viewpoint, just saying...

Sarah Laurenson 1:19 PM, June 07, 2010  

Actually a lot of cops who pull you over for a ticket will be nice about it if you're nice to them. And there are many who will let you go with a warning if you're polite.

When I was riding with the city cops, I got to see more of what made them tick. What they saw on a regular basis were the "bad" guys and after awhile, you begin to think everyone is that way.

Alcoholism rate's pretty high. Suicide rate as well (but not as high as dentists). Power tripping can be common. Not sure how things are these days with tasers and cameras changing the face of it all.

Sarah Laurenson 1:20 PM, June 07, 2010  

And yes, Stephen. There are those who want a favor in exchange for letting you go. But they don't wait until they see you at work.

Erica Orloff 6:43 AM, June 08, 2010  

Aimless:
Creepy!

Erica Orloff 6:44 AM, June 08, 2010  

Starbucks:
I don't know that I thought it was super nice . . . but it also wasn't what I EXPECTED . . . so kind of interesting. I'm always studying people.

Erica Orloff 6:45 AM, June 08, 2010  

Ann Marie:
Yes . . . as a writer, the next step is the WHY of actions.

Erica Orloff 6:45 AM, June 08, 2010  

Kath:
Steve is a cynic. ;-) His worldview has changed since he lost the Scrabble match.

Erica Orloff 6:46 AM, June 08, 2010  

Sarah:
I have one cop in my family. Not a nice guy.


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