Monday, January 21, 2008

Only You

So much to post, where do I begin. Oh yeah. At the MOST important thing. THE GIANTS WON IN OVERTIME!!!!! All is right with my world today. As an aside, I think it's fairly telling that even though they usually break my heart, I have remained loyal to my Men in Blue all these many years. My heart is bursting today. And in honor of it, Baby Girl and I are going to get our nails done today . . . and she will have the wonderful salon owner, who thinks she's cute as a button, paint her nails blue and white. I will try to post a picture tomorrow. If you think I am shutting up about the Giants until Superbowl . . . well, gang, you just don't know me. I've got two glorious weeks of unadulterated joy to bask in.

Two . . . for those writers participating . . . don't forget to get your butt over to Mary's blog today. Even if you're not participating, you can send us gluttons for punishment a word of encouragement or two. And email her tonight with your page or word count. I have a dinner party tonight, so it's entirely possible my count will be pitiful for the day. We'll see.

Three, a quote about writing from Elie Wiesel:

Write only if you cannot live without writing. Write only what you alone can write.

In March I am giving a presentation on writing for the young adult genre at a conference. And while I happily agreed to do it . . . (and if anyone feels like driving to the Richmond, Virginia area to attend, give a yell) . . . when I start putting my presentation folders together, I am often struck by how inadequate it is to try to explain to people how to write what sells, how to write for a certain genre, etc. Because even though I have a command of the mechanics of it all, even though I have worked as an editor for years, as a writer for years, I am ever aware that the real magic happens when writing calls to you. And the thing that will elevate your writing is that story that ONLY YOU can write. It will never be about seeing what's hot in the marketplace and then writing that story. It will always be about writing YOUR story, informed by your life and experiences and passions and interests.

I once mentored a writer who wrote a phenomenal book about a detective, but we all know that's tough to sell. I believed in him, this writer, but I also knew the detective hadn't quite gelled. I couldn't really come up with anything that I, as reader, could say to someone if I was to describe the detective other than "family man, really smart." And THAT isn't going to sell. The plot was great . . . and I genuinely liked the detective, but there was a "so what" editorially.

So the writer started adding quirks. He toyed with the detective being a gambling addict. A recovering alcoholic. X or y. And in the end, I didn't think it much mattered because the writer was tacking traits on instead of somehow digging really, really deep and finding something that ONLY he could write.

When you start tweaking tics . . . start tweaking nuance, I usually feel you are dooming a book. The specialness has to come blazing out of the gate with a roar. The story only you can tell. I can't teach that.

Thoughts? Do you write from that place? The story only you can tell?

24 comments:

Spy Scribbler 9:42 AM, January 21, 2008  

I sure try, LOL, but I think my perception is a little biased. :-) I do try hard to always write with a twist I've never read before.

Anonymous 9:46 AM, January 21, 2008  

Orloff! You shifty blogger!

I think my recent experience with tics and tweaks is similar to my experience with transitions: you know a piece of writing is almost done when you can go back and cut them out because they are extraneous. I always know something is very nearly done when I can cut out my carefully worded transitions because they have been rendered unnecessary. Similarly with character tics and foibles -- when they start to get in the way of the story, you know it's almost there.

Anonymous 9:48 AM, January 21, 2008  

Ha! I've reached the conclusion lately that I have the opposite problem of that writer you're describing!

My characters come blazing out of the gate...so REAL...so Quirky, and I get this, 'who wouldn't want to read about this guy or girl?' kinda surge...then put them in situations that are not perhaps as original as required!

*sigh* I may have to reform my pantster ways and actually figure out how to plot one of these days.

And Mary cheated! I thought our challenge STARTED on Saturday, if it starts today that means I can't count the 11 pages I managed to produce. Plus, I have to get all tricky with my math. Originally I'd concluded :
7 days X 5 pages = 35
Now I have to go:
5 days X 7 pages!

Which means I really have no business being here! Hop to it!

Erica Orloff 10:17 AM, January 21, 2008  

spy:
I think we all try to write from there. I love that quote, though, don't you?

Erica Orloff 10:19 AM, January 21, 2008  

My Dear Van Zile:
I have no idea of what you speak. ;-)

Actually, I swear this example really IS true. The detective character and the writer wanting to make him a gambling addict all of a sudden, then this tic and that one . . . and it wasn't from that deep place. I think YOU on the other hand, have taken that deep journey. There isn't a word in the revision that doesn't seem to be informed from your character's uniqueness.

E

Erica Orloff 10:20 AM, January 21, 2008  

Oh, Lainey:
As my dad would say, "If you're not cheating, you're not trying hard enough." Go ahead and count it!
E

Anonymous 10:32 AM, January 21, 2008  

Sanctioned cheating. tee hee...awe drat! Now its no fun anymore. Which means I'll have to start today, and yet, here I am again!

Erica Orloff 10:51 AM, January 21, 2008  

Lainey:
My mother used to, during Lent (yes, shocking, was once Catholic) give "Papal Dispensation" so we could have candy on special occasions during those 40 days. LOL!

You have my Papal Dispensation to cheat. ;-)
E

Colleen Love 11:46 AM, January 21, 2008  

I would have to say yes, I write from 'that place'. At least I strive too. I write fantasy/paranormal, and some of those characters would be extremely disappointing if you didn't get inside their heads and become them, and their world. That is what I like to do, become them. Besides it's kind of fun, when interupted, to say, 'not now, I'm in the middle of a sword fight.'

Watched the game, glad your Giants won. My Seahawks were done last week and I'm kinda glad when they are. Now DH will stop pacing holes in my carpet!

I was going to participate in Mary's blog event, but I'm really close to finishing this book and don't want to commit to something I can't keep.

Erica Orloff 11:49 AM, January 21, 2008  

Hi Colleen:
I hope I write from that place. My kids tell me I am the Weirdest Mom Ever. So I am guessing, like everyone, I am unique. So I want my stories to be,
E

Edie Ramer 12:24 PM, January 21, 2008  

Boo hiss on the Giants. I'm in deep mourning in Wisconsin. On top of last night's loss, we're getting clobbered with snow today.

I was like your friend, and then I realized what I was good at was writing about people in relationships. Not just man/woman, but friends and families too. Other people might write relationship books, but not the way I do. This is written my way.

Erica Orloff 12:26 PM, January 21, 2008  

Hi Edie:
I did think of you as the Cheeseheads lost.

I have empathy. But you know, I just am SO happy for Eli and the gang.

E

Anonymous 12:46 PM, January 21, 2008  

I write what I want to read. I'm not sure if that's the same thing or not.

When I tweak I tend to do it to try to make the character less like me. Sometimes a little too much of me squirms in.

As for Richmond, when are you going to be there exactly, and where is this being held? My brother lives in Richmond. I may be able to drop by.

Erica Orloff 1:00 PM, January 21, 2008  

Hi Zoe:
It will be a Writers Workshop on March 15 through Chesterfield County, VA's library system. All day sessions, plus a signing and meet and greet from 4-5. I'll know more as it gets a little closer and will post it.
E

Ewoh Nairb 2:10 PM, January 21, 2008  

Funny, butI've been trying to keep the "too weird" out of my characters... maybe what I need is to add more of it into the story and make them really over the top ;P

Erica Orloff 2:15 PM, January 21, 2008  

Hi Ewoh:
You know, I treasure the "too weird." I have totally pushed the envelope in my November release, Freudian Slip, and I guarantee you feathers will be ruffled. Albert Einstein even dresses in drag in one scene. So . . . you know, at some point, I just went for it.
:-)
E

Anonymous 2:27 PM, January 21, 2008  

Erica, it's the only way I know how to write. I'm a heart writer, and following that works for me. I don't read how-to books because it's a POV about the process. At the end of the day it should be your way, all the way! That fits for me.

Off to do some of those pages, so I have something to send Mary tonight.

Erica Orloff 2:33 PM, January 21, 2008  

ladonna:
Me, too. Totally a gut gal.

E

Unknown 3:12 PM, January 21, 2008  

For me its the story that I have to tell. It will eat me alive if I don't.

Sorry Lainey, I didn't mean to cheat. I thought I said Monday but I bet my evil twin snuck onto my computer when I wasn't looking!

Cheers,
Mary C.

Erica Orloff 3:27 PM, January 21, 2008  

Welcome Wonder Woman.

And yeah. I know those stories. The Roofer was one of them.

E

Jude Hardin 11:17 PM, January 21, 2008  

Best of luck to all of you participating in Mary's challenge!

I have some major rewriting to do, so new pages are on the back burner for me for now.

All your advice is spot-on, Erica. Thanks for your wonderful blog.

Stephen Parrish 2:47 AM, January 22, 2008  

Write only what you alone can write.

Every day I come here I get something I can keep forever.

As my dad would say, "If you're not cheating, you're not trying hard enough."

As I said . . .

Erica Orloff 6:39 AM, January 22, 2008  

Jude . . . thanks.

Erica Orloff 6:40 AM, January 22, 2008  

Stephen:
Dad would be so proud.

Don't forget his other adage. A day without larceny is like a day without sunshine.

:-)
E


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