Saturday, September 13, 2008

Mushroom Cloud

I am a huge Law & Order fan. It's my one guilty pleasure. Well, no there's another one. I watch QVC but never buy anything--just marvel at how their spokespeople can get SO excited over fifteen different ways to wear a scarf. It's my Comedy Central. But aside from that, Law & Order is my one TV pleasure. I don't ever watch it first-run. I watch it in reruns when I am too tired to read or knit and just want to veg for an hour. Since I have seen most of the re-runs, I always know who the bad guy is. I watch it, as a writer, more for the cops . . . and the DAs . . . and the various relationships and how they are depicted. My favorite cops are Munch . . . and Goren (two different shows). And in thinking about Goren, I thought the show gives a classic example of how to create a book you can't put down. Because recently, poor Bobby had a mushroom cloud explode in his life.

[STOP READING NOW IF YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT IS.]


Goren found out his real biological father was a serial killer.

Holy CRAP!


[OKAY YOU CAN READ AGAIN.]


I find often the most dramatic books that keep you turning pages have mushroom clouds like that. Some Gound Zero event so devastating that the cloud can be seen and felt for miles.

It doesn't have to be an act of violence--though it can be. It can be something as simple as discovering a previously unknown secret about someone--the husband having an affair, the parent who lied to you for years. It can send a person searching through ash wondering how they missed the clues or desperate to get out of the fallout.

Add to that the real issue at hand.

Because the mushroom cloud is rarely what drives the plot. All it gives you is the ash and fallout against which to write the story. In the case of Goren, the question of his father's been answered--now how does he live his life with that knowledge?

In my Billie Quinn books, Billie's mother was murdered years before. It was the mushroom cloud that devastated her father and cast a shadow over her and her brother's lives. Like all mushroom clouds, there was a life before the explosion and fallout, and there's a life after, but the two bear absolutely no resemblance to each other. That's how powerful the mushroom cloud is.

Lately, in my fiction and works-in-progress, I seem to be gravitating toward this theme. The dramatic possibilities. I suppose it's because I believe that people who come through the mushroom cloud events of their own lives and endure . . . are people who found something inside themselves that didn't let them give up. Those kinds of people interest me.

Thoughts?

22 comments:

Amy Sue Nathan 11:49 AM, September 13, 2008  

The way you write just the post I need on any given day is either divine or freaky. Ok, it's both.

I have been struggling over the order of events in my book. Your mushroom cloud idea tells me that my instincts were correct all along (go figure) and though it's the OMG moment, it merely fascilitates the changes that come after it, it's not really part of the plot.

I've always thought the book needed that KA BOOM. The WHAT THE HECK IS GOING TO HAPPEN NOW moment. Yet, I contemplated that perhaps it was not the mushroom cloud but rather the hook. But then I did some rearranging and realized that if I gave it all away at the beginning, the impact is gone as is the structure of the story.

I guess my question is, is the Mushroom Cloud always a surprise or can it be part of what readers know...with all of the how's and why's remaining a mystery.

I have no clue if that makes sense, but I think you know what the Mushroom Cloud is in my story, E. When I start the book with with, there is no where for the main character to have come from in order to deal with it.

Oh, now I have a headache!!! ;)

The Anti-Wife 12:07 PM, September 13, 2008  

Love the term "mushroom cloud". Very descriptive of those events that change our lives forever.

Erica Orloff 12:22 PM, September 13, 2008  

Hi Amy:
You know, it's all in the execution, but I tend to think the cloud isn't the story. It's just where the story might open and the REAL drama is the aftermath because that's when the characters are challenged. Look at The Lovely Bones. It's the aftermath. The cloud occurred before.

And every book is different of course, but I am finding I respond to this kind of plot/character arc.

Erica Orloff 12:23 PM, September 13, 2008  

hi anti-wife:
It just kind of came to me today. So much of what I write is the nuclear fallout, not the KA-BOOM has Amy used the term.
E

Spy Scribbler 2:51 PM, September 13, 2008  

I have a tendency, lately, to start my stories with the worst day of their life, when the sh#t hits the fan. I fear my kids come off as victims. I don't know. Of course, they all find their strength and triumph at the end.

I still seem stuck, though, in that my characters don't have any family. Sheesh. Every time you mention it, I try to remind myself.

Spy Scribbler 2:52 PM, September 13, 2008  

Cripes. Characters, not kids!

Anonymous 3:09 PM, September 13, 2008  

An excellent analogy. I think that mushroom clouds in characters' lives not only give us plenty of space to play with plots and possibilities, but they also add depth to our characters. Also, we've all had disasters in our own lives, so when we read about them we can relate. And who doesn't want to relate to the characters they're reading about?

Erica Orloff 3:47 PM, September 13, 2008  

spy:
Maybe your characters are your family. ;-) They're your kids!
E

Erica Orloff 3:48 PM, September 13, 2008  

caryn:
I agree. I don't know a single person whose life hasn't "gone nuclear" at some point.

E

Kath Calarco 8:00 PM, September 13, 2008  

I LOVE Law and Order! I'm going to miss Detective Green the most. sniff-sniff.

Mushroom cloud relate - CAUTION! If you're new to watching Showtime's "Dexter", do not read the rest of this.

Mushroom cloud moment that blew me out of my chair was the Dexter episode when it's realized that the new serial killer in town is Dexter's brother, the other serial killer in town. Why'd it blow me away? Because Dexter didn't know he had a brother, and to top it off (the Nagasaki moment) was Dexter's sister madly in love with new serial killer.

COOL!

Erica Orloff 8:13 PM, September 13, 2008  

Kath:
HOLY CRAP!

And then . . . there's the thing. Viewers have that OMG moment, but the FALLOUT is what will play out for a whole season,

E

Suzanne 10:01 PM, September 13, 2008  

So the mushroom cloud is the character's backstory and it could be something they know but the reader doesn't or something no one knows yet.
I guess the mushroon cloud in our books has to, through necessity, come before the story starts and not in the middle of the book or we would have two completely different parts to the book - the before, and the after with the fallout. It could feel like the mushroom cloud had arrived because the writer didn't know where to go with the story.
I guess I'm thinking this through for myself because I'm not sure if what I have written makes any sense.

Erica Orloff 8:32 AM, September 14, 2008  

Hi Suzanne:
I guess it depends on the book--but I tend to think it's not the murder, but how the murder affects everyone. It's not the betrayal but how the person overcomes it. And I also tend to think books often open just AFTER the mushroom cloud, or open AT the point of impact, and then show the fallout.

Just my own writing style, I guess.
E

Jude Hardin 6:40 PM, September 14, 2008  

In my book (series, I hope) there was a literal--and figurative--mushroom cloud twenty years ago when the plane crashed. You're right, Erica. The before and after are altogether different.

Something that rocks your world. A life-changing event. I suppose there are endless possibilities for mushroom clouds.

Merry Monteleone 6:43 PM, September 14, 2008  

Get outta my head, woman!!!

I swear to you, Erica, it's spooky how often your posts coincide with what's going on in my writing... or life... occasionally both... go figure.

By the way, Law and Order is one of my guilty pleasures, too... though I like SVU best, I think.

Chris Eldin 10:19 PM, September 14, 2008  

I've never heard of the term mushroom cloud!
I love it something in a book or movie takes you completely off balance. If it's done well, you can believe in it and stay with the character...

(Law and Order is one of my guilty pleasures too.)

:-)

Ello - Ellen Oh 1:23 AM, September 15, 2008  

I am a huge fan of Law and Order - but SVU is my preference. And I love the mushroom cloud analogy! That is really what it is, isn't it?

Erica Orloff 8:11 AM, September 15, 2008  

Jude:
From what I know of your book, yeah. How could life be the same afterwards? Great example.

Erica Orloff 8:13 AM, September 15, 2008  

Merry:
I like Elliot on that version--and Munch. Munch is probably my fave--I wish they would give him a juicier part. Did you ever see the one where he had to solve the girl whose mom abused her and at the end read Dr. Suess to her??? OMG! Such a riveting episode.

As for my topics--I'm psychic. Or psycho. I forget which one.

:-)
E

Erica Orloff 8:13 AM, September 15, 2008  

Hi Ello:
Since I was reading about Robert Oppenheimer . . . seemed fitting.
E

Erica Orloff 8:13 AM, September 15, 2008  

Hi Chris:
Off-balance . . . yes, great way to put it!
E

Melanie Hooyenga 6:03 PM, September 15, 2008  

Wow, you just sparked an idea for my next book, thanks!


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