Wednesday, September 17, 2008

POP!

I fell asleep in Baby Girl's comfy queen-sized bed last night as we talked about our day. Woke up, like I always do, before the alarm went off. And when I woke up, I had an entire scene pop into my head for a book . . . that until then had only been a kernel. Not just a scene, but dialogue and character names, setting, the whole nine yards. Other people wake up and maybe stumble to the coffee pot, I shut my eyes and "wrote" it all down in my head. Pausing the action once in a while to change a name, or add a detail. Within ten minutes, I knew where the book was going, how it would end. I even had the title.


But here's the thing . . . this has been a book I have been scribbling in my Daytimer for months now. See, I am a dinosaur. I have not yet gone over to one of THESE. Instead . . . . I keep a Daytimer. And each week, I write down all the titles of all the unwritten books and ideas I want to get to eventually. Most have titles. This kernel of an idea was just that. A scribbled word. As a writer, as an editor, I knew SOMETHING was there. I just wasn't sure WHAT. The kernel was nothing more than a single character answering an unusual want ad. That was it. I knew what the ad said. Knew who the character was (what she did for a living). I didn't even QUITE know who placed the ad.

Weeks went on. Dutifully, I kept writing "WANT AD" on my Daytimer. Nothing more would come to me. No names. No faces, really. Just . . . a firm hunch the idea would pan out. Maybe now, maybe a year from now.

And then this morning. Voila. Names, characters, one-liners, dialogue, and . . . finally . . . the man who placed the want ad. Then a book structure took form. WHY the man placed the ad, and WHY he won't even show his face to the woman who answers the ad. Where he lives, what furniture he has. His piano, even. Who works for him. Tapes and movies he gives to the woman. Why there are no pictures in his house. I don't want to give a single thing away because there is a really, really cool hook, so I'll leave that be as far as the blog.

But the kernel is now an unwritten book. I don't outline, so basically, I start at the opening line . . . and write until it's done. Easy, right?

Now, I wish I knew why some kernels pop . . . and some never do. THAT, I suppose is one of the mysteries of the universe, or at least my brain. Why do you get a bag of microwave popcorn . . . and some kernels just sit there, stubbornly refusing to pop at the bottom of the bag. I don't know. But this one popped.

So that's my idea process. How about yours? Do some things pop like that? Or do you have old kernels in the bottom of your bag that simply refuse?

21 comments:

Mark Terry 9:15 AM, September 17, 2008  

Less unpopped and more half-baked. Lot of half-baked ideas. And idea that are good, just not for me to write. Lot of really great ideas that would be better written by someone else. Finding MY ideas is sometimes trickier.

Erica Orloff 9:17 AM, September 17, 2008  

Hi Mark:
I never have that specific problem, I don't think. They always seem like ideas for things I can definitely write. But sometimes I realize it's a hook and nothing more.

E

Amy Sue Nathan 9:47 AM, September 17, 2008  

My kernels pop in the shower...and then I have the terrible task of either getting out and writing down something making a mess everywhere, or repeating it to myself a hundred times so I don't forget to write it down. This happened recently, and I have a file on my computer that just has notes, lines, names for my next book. Funny thing, the idea that popped up in my head can go either an adult or YA way, so I'll have to see what pops next. :) Oh, and I'm not starting any new book until #1 is at least out on submission to agents.

Jude Hardin 10:07 AM, September 17, 2008  

I get all my ideas from Yahoo! news, with slight embellishments of my own (in italics). Here's four just from today:

Lion, people survive Ike inside a church. Carnage ensues.

World's smallest man meets leggiest woman. Carnage ensues.

Fed bails out troubled AIG with $85 billion in taxpayer money. Carnage ensues.

And don't any of you punks even think about stealing my ideas.

Erica Orloff 10:31 AM, September 17, 2008  

Amy:
OMG--that's always my issue, too. I have ideas that can go YA or adult--I just never know.

E

Erica Orloff 10:31 AM, September 17, 2008  

Jude:
LOL!

Carnage indeed.

E

Spy Scribbler 10:44 AM, September 17, 2008  

GAWD, I hate those unpopped kernels. Literally and figuratively. Totally have them.

I need to start imagining more ideas. It's strange: when I first started writing, I got like two a day. Pretty soon I had a file so big it was overwhelming, and I sorta turned it off. I'm still using those ideas, and my imagination tends to play in my current and next WIP. I need to get it back to imagining more new ideas.

Anonymous 1:07 PM, September 17, 2008  

Great minds think alike. I wrote a post earlier on Works in Progress.

Now the reason I think some ideas don't pane out is because they are just that--ideas. They never snowball into something else. Also those ideas never garner enough interest to keep going back to it and mulling it over and over until POP!

Another reason ideas pop for me is that the right character comes along. At that point there is no turning back.

Erica Orloff 2:06 PM, September 17, 2008  

spy:
I was the same--often opening old stuff. But I LOVE this new idea.

:-)
E

Erica Orloff 2:06 PM, September 17, 2008  

melissa:
Hmm . . . yes. A character can gel and entire concept for me.
E

Melanie Hooyenga 2:23 PM, September 17, 2008  

I had an idea pop a couple days ago but I think it's a mystery kernel that snuck into the bag. I don't want to write the story, but scenes, etc, all played out in my head.

Erica Orloff 3:02 PM, September 17, 2008  

melanie:
LOL! Mystery kernel. Love it.
E

Jude Hardin 3:21 PM, September 17, 2008  

The great thing about my new and improved idea generator The Idea MegaWheel 3000, Erica, is that it works with any genre!. Don't care for carnage? Just spin the wheel again. If it lands on hilarity ensues, you got yourself a comedy!

Romance ensues. Intrigue ensues. Apocalypse ensues. And so on and so forth.

It's the revolutionary new Idea MegaWheel 3000, and it's only $19.95!

...Okay, so maybe I've finally lost it.

Erica Orloff 8:58 PM, September 17, 2008  

Jude:
I love it! Put in an order for me!

Zoe Winters 7:52 AM, September 18, 2008  

I keep my ideas on actual physical paper in a notebook as well. I have a large read leather blank book that I write my ideas in.

Anonymous 11:05 AM, September 18, 2008  

Hey Erica, I love your mind! Okay, my kernels are characters. That's what I get first, then I wait and see if they'll talk (pop). Picture an elevator with a few people, a good day is when the door opens and I see a landscape. Or when one of the characters just starts talking. Yeah, that's a great day. Eventually, they all walk out of the elevator (bag) and we can get on with the story.

Erica Orloff 8:03 AM, September 19, 2008  

Hi Zoe:
My best friend has notebooks . . . I tried that--sometimes I scribble story maps. But that's about it.
E

Erica Orloff 8:04 AM, September 19, 2008  

ladonna:
I love how you describe that.
E

Spiced Apple Eye 8:10 AM, September 19, 2008  

My popcorn burns and there are still unpopped kernels. There is one idea though that I keep notes on. I carry the notebook with me everywhere because I never know when I will think of something.It came from Brian Lamb's Booknotes. It's the story of a Vietnamese woman whose mother had to tell her daughter "I don't love you, leave home" because it was that or the daughter would be murdered. While the adult daughter was talking I could only think of what it must have been like to be the mother.

Erica Orloff 8:30 AM, September 19, 2008  

richmond writer:
A true Sophie's Choice. Yes, sometimes either something I read or a news story stirs up things like that.

E

ssas 7:16 PM, September 19, 2008  

I'm studying lucid dreaming for my new WIP and the biggest thing I've learned is how open we are when we stand in the doorway of sleep. It doesn't matter which way we are looking; it's when creativity strikes.

For me it's just remembering it later.


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